Monday, December 1, 2014

Frozen in a Dream

Time stands still when I am not with you,

The yellow fluttering leaves become a trance,

A single season of sorrow,

And at every corner, every turn,

I see you.
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2 comments:

  1. UnknownDecember 30, 2014 at 9:23 PM

    Praise may seem like it comes easy from me but believe me that's not the case. I tend only to comment on things that move me and pass on negative commenting as I don't think it's constructive or fair to devalue something some one else likes. God I know I hate when people do that to me.
    Oh, Yea I almost forgot to say this poem is awesome and I really like it. Good job.

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  2. scottizuDecember 30, 2014 at 11:43 PM

    Thanks @Casey Patrick!

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