Monday, December 1, 2014

Frozen in a Dream

Time stands still when I am not with you,

The yellow fluttering leaves become a trance,

A single season of sorrow,

And at every corner, every turn,

I see you.


  1. Praise may seem like it comes easy from me but believe me that's not the case. I tend only to comment on things that move me and pass on negative commenting as I don't think it's constructive or fair to devalue something some one else likes. God I know I hate when people do that to me.
    Oh, Yea I almost forgot to say this poem is awesome and I really like it. Good job.