Friday, January 2, 2015

The Perfect Bite

I once new a girl,

Who looked at the world,

In a perfected form fashion.


She broke out a smile,

But all of the while,

Never released any passion.


With food and each bite,

What a gracious sight,

But did she really feel so free?


Once at In N Out,

We ended the drought,

With a unique discovery.


All of the hamburger ingredients,
she had only tasted one at a time,

But now she decided to stuff her mouth
and all of this, quite frankly, blew her mind.

<SI> Scott Izu, PhD
© January 2014


  1. I loved this right up till the end. Not sure why you broke form so drastically with the last four lines but over all I loved it.

  2. I think its a method to empasize the ending. Also, plays on the imagery of stuffing something that doesnt fit. :) Glad you liked it.