I once new a girl,
Who looked at the world,
In a perfected form fashion.
...
She broke out a smile,
But all of the while,
Never released any passion.
...
With food and each bite,
What a gracious sight,
But did she really feel so free?
...
Once at In N Out,
We ended the drought,
With a unique discovery.
...
All of the hamburger ingredients,
she had only tasted one at a time,
But now she decided to stuff her mouth
and all of this, quite frankly, blew her mind.
...
<SI> Scott Izu, PhD
© January 2014
I loved this right up till the end. Not sure why you broke form so drastically with the last four lines but over all I loved it.
ReplyDeleteI think its a method to empasize the ending. Also, plays on the imagery of stuffing something that doesnt fit. :) Glad you liked it.
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